I don't think the Rashomon structure particularly added anything to the story especially as it totally cops out of any ambiguity at the very start of Comer's section, which is by far the most compelling. It's quite interesting towards the end when the stakes finally get revealed but the middle section with blonde Ben Affleck and Adam Driver is utter drivel.
Had to rewatch my own short today. With a bit of distance now there are things I like and things I don't. I think I overreached a bit in the final mass death scene and you start to feel our budget and time constraints. Shooting everyone dying was incredibly rushed and we had lots of failing vomit effects and had to resort to filling people's mouths with a porridge-like substance, I was going for Ken Russell's The Devils and ended up with Larry Cohen's The Stuff. However, overall I think we did pretty well. The cast is all superb.